Waiting for It

I overheard a gentle comment
while I waited for the next part
of my life to begin:

"Sometimes it is in the waiting."

My expectation increased as I hoped
for an explanation of "it."  There was none.

What is "it?"
I could only guess.
A better life?
Romance?
A purer delight?

Then my fear took over.
What if I waited for "it" wrong?
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  1. Caleb Cheruiyot's avatar Caleb Cheruiyot says:
    March 26, 2025 at 10:09 am

    Wonderful ♥️

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    1. threadfollower's avatar threadfollower says:
      March 27, 2025 at 10:24 am

      Thank you!

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    1. threadfollower's avatar threadfollower says:
      March 27, 2025 at 10:24 am

      Thank you for your kind feedback and for passing the poem along…

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  3. AdamFenner's avatar AdamFenner says:
    March 27, 2025 at 9:48 am

    Your poem captures the uncertainty of waiting in such a relatable way. The shift from quiet reflection to doubt feels natural, and the open-endedness leaves a lasting impression.
    I regularly review past and present poetry, and I’ve shared your poem here. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Best, Adam

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